This outline wrote by Alexandra Sifferlin “closing quickly,”. It is the risk that threaten many cities in Africa. It shows in 1976 and killing between 50% and 90% of those infected with the virus. Ebola will move to all the world if they do not stop it.Ebola virus in animals.Although non-human primates have been a source of infection for humans, they are not thought to be the reservoir but rather an accidental host like human beings. Since 1994, Ebola outbreaks from the EBOV and TAFV species have been observed in chimpanzees and gorillas. Ebola comes from villages in the west and the central of Africa.Ebola virus (EBOV), like Marburg virus, belongs to the Filoviridae, a family of nonsegmented, negative-stranded RNA viruses. EBOV is composed of 4 known species—namely, Ebola virus Zaire (EBOV-Z), Ebola virus Sudan, Ebola virus Côte d'Ivoire, and Ebola virus Reston. I feel how risk is this virus, so rich countries should pay attention to this scary virus . Poor cities should have hospital and clean food and water because virus comes from pollution. Ebola kills many African because this virus move fast. Although, this virus can move with the water and the air, so it is dangerous. Any one be able to have this illness. If any one from Africa travel to another city, he could help the virus move and spreads to be global problem. For example, CNN news published Dr. Rick Sacra came form Africa and Infected with the virus. Sacra, the third American with Ebola to return to the United States for treatment, was stationed in Liberia when he was exposed to the virus. It is need to solve.
Sunday, September 7, 2014
Ebola
This outline wrote by Alexandra Sifferlin “closing quickly,”. It is the risk that threaten many cities in Africa. It shows in 1976 and killing between 50% and 90% of those infected with the virus. Ebola will move to all the world if they do not stop it.Ebola virus in animals.Although non-human primates have been a source of infection for humans, they are not thought to be the reservoir but rather an accidental host like human beings. Since 1994, Ebola outbreaks from the EBOV and TAFV species have been observed in chimpanzees and gorillas. Ebola comes from villages in the west and the central of Africa.Ebola virus (EBOV), like Marburg virus, belongs to the Filoviridae, a family of nonsegmented, negative-stranded RNA viruses. EBOV is composed of 4 known species—namely, Ebola virus Zaire (EBOV-Z), Ebola virus Sudan, Ebola virus Côte d'Ivoire, and Ebola virus Reston. I feel how risk is this virus, so rich countries should pay attention to this scary virus . Poor cities should have hospital and clean food and water because virus comes from pollution. Ebola kills many African because this virus move fast. Although, this virus can move with the water and the air, so it is dangerous. Any one be able to have this illness. If any one from Africa travel to another city, he could help the virus move and spreads to be global problem. For example, CNN news published Dr. Rick Sacra came form Africa and Infected with the virus. Sacra, the third American with Ebola to return to the United States for treatment, was stationed in Liberia when he was exposed to the virus. It is need to solve.
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You have done some great additional research on the topic and you have linked those sources, great. One thing to really work on in your blogs is clarity of ideas. While I am not grading on structure, sometimes your ideas are not accurately presented when your structure is not correct. For example, you write "It shows in 1976 and killing..." What is 'it'? And the first clause is not a complete thought so it is confusing to a reader. While you have found great information from sources, your writing does not have strong unity. So make sure you take some time to plan what you want to say before you begin writing, it will help you with organizing your thoughts.
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